More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

In recent years, the issue related to immigration to a metropolis has attracted the public’s attention. Some experts suggest that

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phenomenon could lead overpopulation to

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cities, while others

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that it should be immediately controlled by authorities. In the following, paragraphs, the potential difficulties and feasible approaches will be

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. As for the

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aspect, living in an urban city inevitably experiences

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environment.

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, individuals obviously desire to have a better life,

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to be the major reason for their movement.

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, the demand

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jobs enquiring has excessively increased even though

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trend completely converses to lower recruitments thanks to the

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economic recession.

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, it is undeniable that

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of living in capitals are exorbitantly high, compared to rural areas. Unfortunately, living allowances are completely irrelevant to basic salary;

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, plentiful employees suffer struggle with financial problems

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as debt obligations and lack of financial liquidity. Owing to Bangkok Post’s report,

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, 65.5% of the residential respondents identify as the most serious problem more expensive products and the high cost of living caused by rising investment costs and higher taxes. Regrading to the

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viewpoint,

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, ministries should decentralise abundant business sectors to the vicinity.

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, Incheon – a South Korean city bordering

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of Seoul – has been developed to be the conurbation by the unitary state in order to solve overcrowding,

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, they can succeed in the distribution of jobs eventually.

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, expanding fiscal measures in

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of imposing price control, lowering fuel prices and taking tough action against those taking advantage of citizens need to be suddenly implemented. Regarding people belonging to

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, administrations should take actions to increase salaries and wages, lower taxes, as well as interest rates, and extend loan repayment periods. To conclude,

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these situations are a severe issue, there are steps that

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can take to minimize its results.

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, these factors will be noticeably changed by feasible approaches.