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What are the advantages and disadvantages of working or studying at home?

#home
Nowadays, online working and studying are very relevant, especially during the pandemic. All types of directions have switched to online
work
,
accordingly
, we can see the advantages and disadvantages of
work
 and study at home.
Firstly
, the biggest advantage of
this
 is that the home system will allow you to choose an individual approach based on the characteristics of a
person
 and develop all his abilities without any interference and loss of
time
.Everyone will learn how to independently extract information and will be able to devote more
time
 to the most suitable things.
Thus
, that
person
 will know for sure his main goal and talent.
Secondly
, the probability of getting stress will decrease, which happens almost every day. As everyone knows, a
person
 or child spends most of his
time
 outside the house and simply spends his
time
 and nerves, and because of
this
, health problems can occur that can lead to bad consequences.
Nevertheless
, you can protect yourself from harmful influences and environmental pressure.
On the other hand
, there are
also
 disadvantages,
such
 as a lack of social skills. A
person
 will have a very limited social circle. Since in the future he will have to communicate with people, he will become closed. A
person
 who communicates daily with peers learns to respond to types of behaviour, protect himself, support his point of view and strengthen self-confidence. It can lead to problems with socialization.
Moreover
,
work
 at home requires a complex organization of everyday life and a pretty strict approach to the need for studying, working and effort, especially when there are several children.
This
 can lead to fatigue, to the loss of human interest.
As a result
, a
person
 can go to offline training or
work
. In conclusion, we can say that if a
person
 is organized and independent, and
also
 knows how to communicate with people,
then
 online
work
 and training will be useful,
on the contrary
.
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