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In the future nobody will buy printed books or newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online for free. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this statement

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It is been over a decade, humans used printed
books
 and
newspapers
 as the main sources for updating news or information, but since the
internet
 has come, many
people
 change their way to receive news.
However
, I do believe that printed
books
 and
newspapers
 will decrease slightly in terms of being the main sources, but they will not disappear due to the
internet
. The following paragraph will be discussing my agreement in the statement.
Therefore
, the conclusion has been reached.
To begin
 with, as the introduction have been said, I believe that printed
books
 and newspaper will still exist because there are many
people
 who preferred to read from printed
books
 and newspaper more than read from the online.
Also
, the information and contents from printed
books
 and
newspapers
 always have a reliable source more than the information on the
internet
 that any
people
 can edit
it
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.
In addition
, the feeling of reading from the
internet
 and from printed
books
 or
newspapers
 are not the same,
also
 there are lots of
people
 who like the texture of the paper. So, as long as
this
 group still exist printed
books
 or
newspapers
 will not fade away.
Moreover
, printed
books
 and
newspapers
also
 have an advantage over the
internet
.
For example
, there are some areas that the
internet
 could not reach, so
people
 around that area will not be able to use the
internet
. But for printed
books
 and
newspapers
. It is always available for them, as long as they take
books
 or
newspapers
 with them. In summary, I cannot entirely agree with the statement. It is obvious that printed
books
 and
newspapers
 will not disappear due to the
internet
, as long as there are
people
 who loved to read from the
books
 and
newspapers
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • printed books
  • newspapers
  • online reading
  • digital content
  • paywall
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-saving
  • environmental impact
  • traditional reading experience
  • ownership
  • personal connection
  • reliability
  • credibility
  • digital divide
  • accessibility issues
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