Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while other think that it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with discuss both options.
Having a
pet
in a house has become conventional these days.While some people
argue that keeping a pet
is fatal for children
.Both sides of this
will be discussed and I will explain why I feel children
enjoy owning a pet
and it has no dangers at all.
According to some, pets
are deterimental
for Correct your spelling
detrimental
children
.It is mainly because some people
feel dogs and cats do not understand human nature and can harm their loved ones without no
Correct quantifier usage
any
reason
.For example
, my mother does not allow me to own a pet
just because she Correct your spelling
believes
belives
they can harm family members.Correct your spelling
believes
Secondly
, another reason
is fake humours
,Change the wording
humour
senses of humour
touches of humour
people
misconception of pets
that they bite a lot and can not distinguish between things and people
whom they bite.
I oppose this
view , however
, Having pets
are quite safe and they also
teach many things to children
.For instance
, my cousin has a dog and since he owns that dog his behaviour has changed drastically.He renains
much calm now and his dog is the Correct your spelling
remains
retains
reason
for it.For this
reason
having Add a comma
,reason
pets
is safe and they don't harm at all.
To conclude, some argue that domesticating animals are not safe , but it is safe indeed.Submitted by patelrinkal029 on
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