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“A friend in power is a friend lost.” Do you agree or disagree with this statement by Henry Brooks Adams? Support your ideas with reasoning and examples.

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The writer Henry Brooks Adams said that a
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 in
power
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 is a
friend
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 lost. Good friendships are not supported on who has more things that can be from material belongings to inner qualities. So, I could not disagree more with
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 phrase. 
Firstly
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, is important to know what is a good and strong relationship between
friends
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. When
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 talk about their
friends
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 they may have a lot of them or only a few.
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 is not important. A good friendship is that
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 where they do not have to show off their achievements.
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, they are not worried to talk about those situations that they are screwed. Usually, when someone has a relationship like
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 it is not a problem if
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 of the
friends
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 turns to be in the
power
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. 
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, some
people
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 when they got the
power
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 they change.
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, having the
power
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 can refer to a lot of things: Becoming rich, Being very successful at their jobs, Even turning into the boss of that
friend
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. But I am of the opinion that actually
power
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 works more like alcohol. It turns what
people
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 are into something more exaggerated of what they are. The funny
one
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 becomes funnier. The
one
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 who likes to talk
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 talks more. So, if the friendship ends because
one
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 of the
friends
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 has changed it is because from the beginning he was not a good
friend
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.  In conclusion, is important to know the
people
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 that we are because if you have
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 honest friendship and know the person
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 beside you. The statement about losing a
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 when he gets the
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 will not be true.
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 to
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, I have a
friend
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 who is being very successful and our relationship has not changed at all.
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