You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Angelo,
I hope everything is fine
for
you. It has been Change preposition
with
long
time since we had a discussion. I received your letter asking for some Change the article
a long
advise
and I know you are stressed and worried whether you will go Replace the word
advice
for
Change preposition
to
a
college or get a Correct article usage
apply
job
first
.
Let me explain to you first
, since i
knew you from high school I could say studying is not your thing. Change the capitalization
I
Additionally
, if you remember way back time one day I followed you for escaping the class and you went to your father welding shop in order to help him repairing
Wrong verb form
repair
Correct article usage
a damage
Replace the word
damaged
damage
Correct your spelling
damaged
car
. Fix the agreement mistake
cars
Thus
, time
I realized that going to college is not your priority so I can advise you to get a Add an article
the time
a time
job
rather than going to study.
Hence
, you already have some knowledge in a welding shop why not to
try a Fix the infinitive
apply
job
which
is related to cars like automotive, and tire technician. I think those jobs are more suitable for you.
I hope those suggestions that I mentioned to you could give Correct pronoun usage
that
a
tips for getting a Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
job
in the near future.
Keep in touch.
All the best,
Michael JohnSubmitted by ding
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite