Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. Agree or disagree?

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about the idea governments should fully sponsor the tuition fee to make sure everyone could attend

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. While

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could offer benefits, I strongly disagree with

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act for two reasons. On the one hand, it is true that the abolition of college fees could benefit both students and society. Admittedly, as more people are freely admitted to the

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, the number of bachelor degree holders could increase, which equals the rise in the quantity of a more educated workforce. With these qualifications, they could secure well-paid jobs, which not only benefits t

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make contributions to their country's economic development.

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argument is flawed, since there are many jobs that do not require a higher

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degree to make money.

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, to do a job as a hairdresser, one just needs to take vocational training courses

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of spending four years or more attending

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tuition to everyone is unnecessary.

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, I side with those who are against allotting state funding for two reasons.

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, free tuition could negatively influence students’ academic performance. Since being exempt from

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financial obligation, which normally makes them take studying seriously, students could be indifferent to their study and lose the drive to work hard.

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, they may skip classes or miss exams because they feel that failing does not cost them anything. These b

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obviously may lead to deteriorating performance and students would fail to benefit from their

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, not all country has the financial ability to subside the

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fee. Take some less-developed countries in African

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as Angola

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, there are other sectors requiring the government's help while the national budget is limited.

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, the government has to consider funding sectors that need more urgent help.

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, in the current situation when the COVID pandemic has been widespread and costs millions of lives, these countries obviously should put more financial emphasis on healthcare.

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, providing free higher

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sounds impractical. In conclusion, even though freeing

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could provide a higher qualification workforce, I support the idea that government should not do

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due to the negative impact

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act causes on students’ studying attitude and its impracticality in the current situation.