Some people think young people should be required to have full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The duration of full-time education that one should adopt has been a debated issue. While some people suggest that one should not end their full-time studying until adolescence age, I totally disagree with

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idea.

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, finance should be taken into consideration when one’s time is fully devoted to studying. For those whose family struggles with financial issues, a full-time study would be a huge burden. Though financial funds may be offered, they are not likely to fully cover the costs.

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of spending all day at an educational institution, teenagers could financially support their family b

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money earned from different sources

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as working in a factory.

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, full-time education for their whole teenage period may not be ideal for underprivileged families.

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, each individual should be entitled to pursue their own paths other than the masses of studying. The idea that studying all day at

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will offer a better future has been becoming rampant on various media platforms.

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may be true to some extent, but not for all teenagers. For those who are not destined for studying and researching, it must be mentally painful to sit all day a

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college bench.

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, dropping out of

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does not mean a future scenario. Richard Branson is a case in point. After leaving high

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at the age of 16, he started his own business and became one of the most successful entrepreneurs in the world.

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is a testament to pursuing one’s own value. In conclusion, I totally disagree with the idea that all teenagers should finish their high

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education and the duration of full-time should be considered in tandem with their financial condition and willingness.