Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is undeniable that there are quite a lot of
people
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who are eager to live
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a stable life and avoid
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, while others think that it will always be better if
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change
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their lives regularly. From my point of view, I believe that
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would have more benefits when they
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themselves frequently,
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, sometimes
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are still able to
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unchangable
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lives. On the one hand, doing the same things and avoiding
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could help
people
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in several cases.
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with,
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can find it easier or more comfortable to live in a place which they have been extremely
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, they will less worry about the living conditions or
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such
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as security, transportation. For
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, if someone
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has been living in the city since they were kids, they may find
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difficult to move to the countryside.
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, there are
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of reasons why
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should
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frequently.
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of all, workers can
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their jobs or companies,
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, changing jobs would be a great way to broaden their
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.
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, they can find some potential talents and skills that they have never known,
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they certainly
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acquire
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more opportunities and have a better life.
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, changing jobs too much is not always good because it could not improve and develop some specific skills.
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, if someone
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to
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their job because they feel
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, they may not try their best to improve their skills. To sum up,
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can choose to have an
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unchangeable
life,
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, changing sometimes would
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be great.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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