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Counries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Thanks to globalization, the world is getting smaller.
This
 leads to some situations. Every
people
 have a chance to buy any products independent
from
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 where it
produce
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.
This
 affects
people’s
 look and countries’ too. Countries have similar
appearence
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appearance
 nowadays. In my opinion,
this
 is not a completely bad situation but
people
 be cautious
on
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 that. In
this
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 I will explain why I think like
this
. Because of the
tecnological
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technological
 improvements, interaction among countries increase.
This
 affects
people’s
 daily life.
For instance
, wherever
people
 live, every
people
 have a chance to buy clothes
in
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a
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 same brand. Because
people’s
 looks reflect their
culture
this
 has a negative impact on it.
Culture
 is the term
which
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 includes
people’s
appearence
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appearance
, attitudes to life. If every
people
 have
a
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 same look or similar items,
culture
 will
deprived
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from
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 them.
Moreover
, it will affect
tourisim
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tourism
 in a negative way.
Tourist
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Tourists
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 want to see different items, features when they visit a country. If every country
have
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 a similar appearance,
foreing
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foreign
countriswill
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countries will
country will
 not attract tourist.
On the other hand
, having similar items has some positive sides. It can be seen that
people
 have
same
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 opportunities even if they live
in
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 different sides of the world.
Furthermore
, as
people
 have a chance to buy similar goods, they can feel more comfortable when they go abroad. In conclusion, I
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believe
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belive
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believe
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 that having similar
opportunies
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opportunities
 is an
advantegous
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advantageous
 situation. Adapting
a
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countries’ life is getting
more
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easier.
However
, it has a negative impact on
culture
 which is significantly important. To protect their
culture
,
people
 should pay attention
on
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 it. Even if they live in a global world, they keep their traditions.
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