Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays
people
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travel to different parts of the foreign world for entertainment and some other for business-related purposes. Some pupils believe that visiting and exploring foreign
nations
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have a bad impact on the
nations
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visited. I disagree with
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point of view and in the
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few ,paragraphs I shall explain why visiting other
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will not impact their countries. Most
people
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prefer to visit foreign
nations
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like Europe and Australia, in order to explore and know the cultures, customs and traditions of different
people
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’s and their communities. One can not only explore in deep about the practices and customs that a state has been executing since their ancestors and
increase
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cultural awareness and sensitivity.
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, the
tourist
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visiting the foreign country will bring a
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of money with them and spent it on their current tour for different activities like transportation, accommodation and shopping.
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, it will generate a
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of revenue for the tourism sector and
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the GDP of the nation and citizens of that nation earn a sufficient amount of money and benefit from it. For, example research conducted by an Australian international agency, holiday visits, has noted that foreign tourists visiting other
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has increased many folds since the
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decade and spent around 90 million dollars globally and other country’s tourism industry is benefiting from it a
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.
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, many countries across the world are able to
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their income by focusing on infrastructure in the
tourist
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sector like building world-class hotels and accommodations, shopping malls and attracting millions of visitors from across the globe and gradually increasing their economic activities.
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the citizens of their country will benefit a
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in terms of generating huge profits to the invested capital. On top of that,
tourist
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while travelling will meet with many new
people
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and try new adventures and experience
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for a lifetime, that cannot be obtained while working. On other hand, tourists going on foreign visits may affect badly local businesses, which depend on local
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. To wrap up, I truly believe that tourists visiting other new
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will not only become aware of the cultures and traditions of them but
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increase
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the revenue of that nation by spending a
lot
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on travelling, staying and shopping.
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,
people
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of a foreign country will eventually benefit from the
tourist
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by increasing sales and generating huge profits
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural exchanges
  • Global connections
  • Tourism boosts
  • Local economy
  • Over-tourism
  • Environmental degradation
  • Landmarks
  • Commodification of culture
  • Authentic cultural expressions
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Tourism infrastructure
  • Public services
  • Disrespect local customs
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