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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply

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Dear Sowjanya, Hope you are doing pretty well. I have received your letter seeking advice about the course I did
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 year. As in the previous
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 I had told you that I opted for Information Technology from Algoma
university
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 which is one of the best educational institutes
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 Canada. I would strongly suggest you with
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university
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 as it has all the resources and attributes which are tremendously useful for any graduate who is acquiring a degree from it. The
university
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also
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 has a coop plan, that helps the
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 semester students perform their internship from
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renowned companies. For
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, the
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administration
 and the faculty would guide and cope with the students to a great extent. The process of applying
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 the respective
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 is pretty simple. You just have
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visit
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 their website and
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 out the application form for the current academic year by drawing it through the student portal tab.
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 step would be the payment of the application fee and
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for
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the decision. I would love to see you here in
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 place very soon. Best wishes and lots of love, Anjali.
Submitted by Sowjanya on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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