You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include Where you stayed What the problems were How they can fix your complaints

Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter in relation to my stay during a conference at Galaxy

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, Wellington. I stayed in room number 489 and I stayed here for three nights. I was not quite happy with my

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and the services that I was offered during my stay at your hotel.

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, I would like to tell you about the FnB services as it was a complete mess.

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; in the middle of my dining hours, the staff came and started to clear off the dishes.

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, the room service was a blunder, as the washroom was not cleaned appropriately and

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was not made properly.

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, the AC in the room was not working at all. I really think

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that you need to restructure the work

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given to the staff at your hotel. If possible get the employees trained enough to serve the customers in an efficient manner

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so that in future

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kind of mishappening would never occur. I hope you would take my advice in a polite manner. Yours faithfully, Neethu Babu