Even though organic fruits and vegetables are more expensive than conventional fruits and vegetables, they are worth the extra cost. Do you agree or disagree?

Organic food has become trendy nowadays, as more and more people are paying attention to their
health
.
However
, organic produce is more costly than commercial
fruits
and
vegetables
. Even so, it is still
worthy
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to pay extra to buy them because they require maximum attention to grow and are
also
more beneficial to our
health
. Planting
fruits
and
vegetables
organically is not an easy job. Unlike conventional gardeners, organic plant growers cannot use
insecticide
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, that
are
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budget-friendly, to remove insects that will destroy the crop. Organic farmers usually have to use different measures to make insects stay away from the plants, and
such
solutions
cost
higher.
For example
, they have to invest in glasshouses to grow organic plants.
Otherwise
,
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extreme weather and insects will spoil the crop. Due to the high
cost
to grow and yield these
vegetables
and
fruits
, they are marketed at a more expensive price. Organic
fruits
give us the minerals and vitamins we need, without any harmful chemicals in their nutrient. When growing conventional trees, the residue from the chemicals used on the plants gets into the trees and into the produce. It will, in turn, gets into our body when we eat
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and harms our
health
when it is accumulated over a period of time.
This
could give us serious
health
problems
such
as cancer.
However
, organic farmers have to source for
other non-toxic insecticide
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that
are
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higher-priced.
This
is another reason why organic produce is more expensive. To conclude, due to the high
cost
of growing greens organically and the fact that they might prevent us from getting life-threatening diseases, they are more expensive than
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economically grown
fruits
and
vegetables
. I feel that it is reasonable because I would rather invest in my
health
and enjoy
these organic food
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, than pay for the healthcare
cost
at a later time which would be even more costly.
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