Even though organic fruits and vegetables are more expensive than conventional fruits and vegetables, they are worth the extra cost. Do you agree or disagree?
Organic food has become trendy nowadays, as more and more people are paying attention to their
health
. However
, organic produce is more costly than commercial fruits
and vegetables
. Even so, it is still worthy
to pay extra to buy them because they require maximum attention to grow and are Replace the word
worth
also
more beneficial to our health
.
Planting fruits
and vegetables
organically is not an easy job. Unlike conventional gardeners, organic plant growers cannot use insecticide
, that Fix the agreement mistake
insecticides
are
budget-friendly, to remove insects that will destroy the crop. Organic farmers usually have to use different measures to make insects stay away from the plants, and Change the verb form
is
such
solutions cost
higher. For example
, they have to invest in glasshouses to grow organic plants. Otherwise
, the
extreme weather and insects will spoil the crop. Due to the high Correct article usage
apply
cost
to grow and yield these vegetables
and fruits
, they are marketed at a more expensive price.
Organic fruits
give us the minerals and vitamins we need, without any harmful chemicals in their nutrient. When growing conventional trees, the residue from the chemicals used on the plants gets into the trees and into the produce. It will, in turn, gets into our body when we eat,
and harms our Remove the comma
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health
when it is accumulated over a period of time. This
could give us serious health
problems such
as cancer. However
, organic farmers have to source for other non-toxic insecticide
that Change the wording
another non-toxic insecticide
other non-toxic insecticides
are
higher-priced. Change the verb form
is
This
is another reason why organic produce is more expensive.
To conclude, due to the high cost
of growing greens organically and the fact that they might prevent us from getting life-threatening diseases, they are more expensive than the
economically grown Correct article usage
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fruits
and vegetables
. I feel that it is reasonable because I would rather invest in my health
and enjoy these organic food
, than pay for the healthcare Change the determiner
this organic food
cost
at a later time which would be even more costly.Submitted by Wai on
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