Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it isn’t appropriate to use animals for such experiments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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last
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, many beast
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beasts
using
for medical experiments. Some say that using Wrong verb form
used
of
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apply
animals
for medical research
is not a sin and this
is a
one Correct article usage
apply
way
for testing while others think that this
is not a
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essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion for the following reasons.
To begin
with, using of
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apply
animals
is the best way
when testing medicine
for humans, small
size of Add an article
the small
beast
used
for Add a missing verb
is used
this
process
because directly will not test for people before medicine
findout
. Correct your spelling
find out
Fauna
can easily breed and take a duration of very short compare
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compared
than
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to
human
so many researchers are Fix the agreement mistake
humans
utilized
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utilizing
animals
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the coronavirus
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been found
they
initial stage of Correct your spelling
the
finding
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the finding
process
while they have injected vaccine
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the vaccine
to
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into
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the beast
to
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with
research
, as a result
, nowadays we can live without any fearness
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fairness
fears
fearless
Therefore
, animals
are the only possible way
of finding any new medicine
.
Conversely
, fauna
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a soul, it has a rights
to live Fix the agreement mistake
right
a long
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long years
a long year
years
but the research
people are killed frequently when testing medical exploration
, thus
, a large amount of creature
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creatures
can
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candied
died
without living long Change the verb form
die
years
for Add an article
a human
human
. Fix the agreement mistake
humans
For instance
, Rats, Pigs and Monkeys, these are the most testing animals
when the scientist do exploration
, consequently
, these kinds of fauna
can be died
a very short period and during the Change to the active voice
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death
period of Replace the word
dead
time
they suffer many more. Obviously, Add a comma
,time
this
is a
one kind of Remove the article
apply
exploration
murder.
To conclude, using animals
for medical
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the medical
a medical
purpose
has been Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
doing
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done
contiuneously
because people would like to live long Correct your spelling
continuously
years
, hence
they can use many for their exploration
process
, this
is not a
fair when using Change the article
apply
fauna
of finding medicine
for humans. However
, in my opinion, about
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apply
this
, using animals
for scientific
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the scientific
a scientific
process
is not a big issue because the researchers have the one and only way
to using
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use
beast
than the population and the humans wants to live a long
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long years
a long year
years
that's why they are using beast
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the experimental
process
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