Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it isn’t appropriate to use animals for such experiments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Over the

last

two or three decades, science and

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been improving tremendously.

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, many

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have been

using

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for medical experiments. Some say that using

of

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animals

for medical

research

is not a sin and

this

is

a

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one

way

for testing while others think that

this

is not

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correct for

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when using

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test

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. In

this

essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion for the following reasons.

To begin

with, using

of

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animals

is the best

way

when testing

medicine

for humans,

small

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size of

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used

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for

this

process

because directly will not test for people before

medicine

findout

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find out

.

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can easily breed and take a duration of very short

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than

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human

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so many researchers are

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animals

.

For example

,

coronavirus

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vaccine has

found

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by scientists,

they

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initial stage of

finding

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process

while they have injected

vaccine

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to

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beast

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because that time they are not finished

to

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their

research

,

as a result

, nowadays we can live without any

fearness

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fairness

fears

fearless

.

Therefore

,

animals

are the only possible

way

of finding any new

medicine

.

Conversely

,

fauna

is

also

a soul, it has a

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to live

a long

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years

but the

research

people are killed frequently when testing medical

exploration

,

thus

, a large amount of

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can

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candied

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died

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without living long

years

for

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a human

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human

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.

For instance

, Rats, Pigs and Monkeys, these are the most testing

animals

when the scientist do

exploration

,

consequently

, these kinds of

fauna

can

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a very short period and during the

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period of

time

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they suffer many more. Obviously,

this

is

a

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one kind of

exploration

murder. To conclude, using

animals

for

medical

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purpose

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has been

doing

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contiuneously

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continuously

because people would like to live long

years

,

hence

they can use many for their

exploration

process

,

this

is not

a

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fair when using

fauna

of finding

medicine

for humans.

However

, in my opinion,

about

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this

, using

animals

for

scientific

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process

is not a big issue because the researchers have the one and only

way

to

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beast

than the population and the humans wants to live

a long

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years

that's why they are using

beast

for

experimental

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process

.