Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Discipline is
the
utmost Change preposition
of the
important
of every society especially the children. Hitting children cannot give proper control because they are very little Replace the word
importance
one
, you cannot deal aggressively Correct pronoun usage
ones
to
them. Change preposition
with
Threfore
, I strongly disagree with Correct your spelling
Therefore
this
statement for the following reasons.
To begin
with, there are many reasons for does not slap infant
. Fix the agreement mistake
infants
Firstly
, they are very small buds, we do not beat for control purpose because this
technique might be affected negatively. All toddlers are not being same, everyone is different so the elders will allow to do
some Change the verb form
doing
mistake
because they learn from their's own Fix the agreement mistake
mistakes
mistake
. Fix the agreement mistake
mistakes
For example
, a recent report by WHO said that more than 75% of the offsprings
has been affecting Fix the agreement mistake
offspring
menatl
disorders by slapping for discipline activities. Correct your spelling
mental
Hence
, striking babies do not help for
maintaining control.
Change preposition
in
Moreover
, when beating a child he can do more mistake
and sometimes he has to do Fix the agreement mistake
mistakes
wantedly
without any proper reasons. Correct your spelling
wanted
This
can leads
to creating Wrong verb form
lead
fearness
and Correct your spelling
fairness
fearless
maintaing
distance Correct your spelling
maintaining
maintain
to
their parents or elders, Change preposition
from
consequently
, they never
close to them in order to they might be done some illegal activities Add a missing verb
are never
such
as theft. For instance
, India has a lot of children Change preposition
in prison
prison
, many offsprings have done some offence by their parents Fix the agreement mistake
prisons
oftenly
striking. Correct your spelling
often
Therefore
, smacking toddler
is not the best form of controlling them.
To conclude, the babies are very soft and their heart is pure soul, we cannot hurt them by smacking. I strongly disagree with Fix the agreement mistake
toddlers
this
statement because they might be done
any other criminal activities and Wrong verb form
doing
this
can create distance from their parents. I hope the elders should not smacking to their kids, they will follow the rules and regulations when they become an adult. The fathers should be a
friendly manner and teach any other good manners with kindly words.Change preposition
in a
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