Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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utmost
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of every society especially the children. Hitting children cannot give proper control because they are very little
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, you cannot deal aggressively
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them.
Threfore
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Therefore
, I strongly disagree with
this
statement for the following reasons.
To begin
with, there are many reasons for does not slap
infant
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infants
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.
Firstly
, they are very small buds, we do not beat for control purpose because
this
technique might be affected negatively. All toddlers are not being same, everyone is different so the elders will allow
to do
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some
mistake
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mistakes
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because they learn from their's own
mistake
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mistakes
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.
For example
, a recent report by WHO said that more than 75% of the
offsprings
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offspring
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has been affecting
menatl
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mental
disorders by slapping for discipline activities.
Hence
, striking babies do not help
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maintaining control.
Moreover
, when beating a child he can do more
mistake
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mistakes
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and sometimes he has to do
wantedly
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wanted
without any proper reasons.
This
can
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to creating
fearness
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fairness
fearless
and
maintaing
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maintaining
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distance
to
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their parents or elders,
consequently
, they
never
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are never
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close to them in order to they might be done some illegal activities
such
as theft.
For instance
, India has a lot of children
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in prison
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prison
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prisons
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, many offsprings have done some offence by their parents
oftenly
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often
striking.
Therefore
, smacking
toddler
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is not the best form of controlling them. To conclude, the babies are very soft and their heart is pure soul, we cannot hurt them by smacking. I strongly disagree with
this
statement because they might be
done
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any other criminal activities and
this
can create distance from their parents. I hope the elders should not smacking to their kids, they will follow the rules and regulations when they become an adult. The fathers should be
a
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friendly manner and teach any other good manners with kindly words.
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