Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

The given line graph illustrates the number of people in the millions who had visited one of the Caribbean islands from 2010 to 2017. Overall, there appears to be a rising trajectory in the total number of
visitors
of
this
Island
, while, the holidaymakers are drawn toward their cruise ship accommodation more than the
island
at the
last
years of the
period
, compared to the starting years. Regarding the
island
,
this
place was chosen by travellers three times more than the cruise ships in 2010.
This
amount remained the same until 2011 before it increased gradually to 1.5
million
visitors
in 2013, at which point it had experienced a plateau for the
next
2 years, before declining by approximately 0.5
million
, which was the
first
time that it was the
second
priority of the
visitors
for accommodation. Following
this
, it recovered and ended the
period
at the same amount as 2015. In terms of the cruise ship and the number of total
visitors
, both features had seen a significant surge over the set
period
. While the former stood at a mere 0.25
million
visitors
in 2010 and had some fluctuations, the overall trend was upward for
this
staying option and it reached 2
million
, 10 times higher than its beginning amount and 0.5
million
more than ones of the
island
, at t the end. Having been skyrocketing, the total
visitors
reached almost 3
million
from 1
million
at the beginning and after a short stagnate,
this
figure again had experienced a sharp rise during the
last
year of the said
period
.
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