Some people believe that money is the major source of happiness in life. do you strongly agree or disagree?

Money

is indeed a crucial source of

happiness

. But

this

being said it comes in with major pitfalls as well.

Hence

, I disagree with the fact that

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money

plays a major role in giving

happiness

in life.

This

essay will highlight the reasons behind my disagreement. To commence with,

firstly

, on the verge of earning more

money

people tend to work for longer hours in

office

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the office

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.

As a result

, he ends up spending less

time

with his family and friends. Even though

money

needs are satisfied, the relationship needs

fails

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to get satisfied.

For instance

, IT

employees

these days prefer to stay near their offices as they live in a village. Though, they earn a good income they fail to spend

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precious

time

with their family.

Hence

, it is not just the

money

which

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makes a person happy, it is

also

the

time

with people and loved ones around him.

This

cannot be fulfilled by

money

.

On the other hand

, due to immense stress and

pressure

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the

employees

tend to get mental sickness.

For example

, the

employees

working in major MNCs are constantly put under deadlines.

This

in turn makes the

employees

depressed.

Although

, there will be a performance bonus for the

hard-work

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the mental health is at a loss. Eventually, the employee loses

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happiness

. To conclude, various other factors like spending

time

with families and having

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good mental health play a crucial role

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happiness

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the happiness

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of a person.

Hence

,

money

is not the only factor that keeps a person happy.