It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some
people
think that we already
born with some particular skills while others believe that Add a missing verb
are already
these proficiency
could Change the determiner
this proficiency
be learn
in Change the verb form
be learned
be learning
childhoood
and achieve similar results. Correct your spelling
childhood
This
essay will discuss both sides of the view and give my opinion why
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on why
talent
does not mean a success
person.
Admittedly, there are special Replace the word
successful
kids
who born
with Add a missing verb
are born
talent
that make Add an article
a talent
people
really impressed because these kids
could easily perform where
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were
others
Correct pronoun usage
other
kids
are still struggling.
For example
, I remembered a classmate in my school that learned really faster how to play a
piano whereas the rest of the class did not even understand what the activity was, so it was a challenge for the majority of class but not Change the article
the
apperently
for him.Correct your spelling
apparently
Therefore
, there are some children that some activities, such
as play
a piano, it is very easy and they can Wrong verb form
playing
executate
without effort.
Correct your spelling
execute
However
, talent
Add an article
the talent
it
is not everything to achieve the best performance. Due to their high intelligence in some aspects of life, sometimes those children could feel bored and Correct pronoun usage
apply
lost
Wrong verb form
lose
interest
in become
the best. Some parents after discovering their son's proficiency in Change the form of the verb
becoming
play
Wrong verb form
playing
piano
, Correct article usage
the piano
for example
, start forcing them spend
hours of training. Add the particle
to spend
As a result
, the kid completely lost interest
and give up before becaming
a brilliant musician. Correct your spelling
becoming
Moreover
, in childhood, people
are still evolving their brains and there is a lot of room to learn new things. Research has shown that kids
have more neuroplasticity to learn than adults, so even though someone does not born
with Change the verb form
bear
Correct your spelling
specific
especific
skill, one can improve considerably during Correct article usage
a especific
this
time. For example
, if the kid shows interest
in star
an art class, without any capability, he would be a great artist just because he Wrong verb form
starting
keep
Change the verb form
keeps
study
and having fun with the activity. Wrong verb form
studying
Therefore
, tallent
is nothing without Correct your spelling
talent
Tallent
trainning
when we talk about elite performance.
To conclude, some Correct your spelling
training
raining
people
could born
with some special skills, and they will be highlighted among the others, but Change the verb form
bear
tallent
Correct your spelling
talent
people
could lost
Change the verb form
lose
be lost
interest
when they are Add an article
a force
force
to do something and never become a Change the form of the verb
forced
talent
person. In my opinion, human has the ability to lean everything without born with it.Replace the word
talented
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