Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
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To begin
with, some people are lazy for doing exercise
after their work they prefer to get on bed as soon as they arrive home because of tiredness. In addition
, even if they have free time many of them wants to spend activities
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doing other
activities
rather than in exercise
. As a result
, many human kinds acquired a
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health related
issues like obesity, heart problems and diabetes.
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if the companies will provide some recreational Correct pronoun usage
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activities
to their employees at least twice of
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month or create a competition that Correct article usage
a
challenge
their staff to do physical Change the verb form
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like biggest
loser and give prizes to those who win the contest. Correct article usage
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Moreover
, provide some educational awareness about the advantage of exercising daily. Furthermore
, encourage them to walk at least 30 minutes a day as well as taking
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Thus
, will help them improve their sedentary lifestyle every day.
To conclude, despite of
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in our lives. It is better to prevent the
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