Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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school
for children
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children
childrens
are being taught to be Correct your spelling
children
good
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a good
member
of society by their Fix the agreement mistake
members
parents
.Simulataneously
others opinion is that Correct your spelling
Simultaneously
school
is the better place
for learning of social values
. In this
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we can analyse Add a comma
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the
both views and will reach our opinion.
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apply
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reason Correct your spelling
significant
of
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for
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someones
someone
belive
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believe
parents
have role
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a role
children
to
be Change the verb form
apply
good
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a good
member
of society is that Fix the agreement mistake
members
parents
are their first
teachers and home
is the first
place
of learning.There are other causes behind it , first
and foremost , everyone considered childhood time is the better stage to prepare them for good fit of our society and most children
are spending more time in home
during their childhood.Therefore
parents
can provide and can show good examples of social value .Secondly
, we can exhort them to participate in caring of
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the home
a home
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will help them to insert some moral values
such
as empathy , sympathy and kind
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kindness
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but not least, parents
can take Correct your spelling
initiative
initative
to make them participate in Correct article usage
the initative
carity
or voluntary activities.Correct your spelling
charity
This
will lead to appear changes in their life and learn the good values
in their childhood will remain for the whole life.
However
, other population
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populations
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believe
belive
that Correct your spelling
believe
school
is the best place
for attaining social values
.To be precise,our major time we are spending in educational institutions and we are getting opportunity
to interact with Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
wide
variety of people. Add an article
a wide
Hence
, teachers can teach them
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the
importance
of sharing , make Add an article
the importance
apologise
for mistakes and mutual respect. Wrong verb form
apologising
School
is considered is the best place
to show significance
of equality because there is Add an article
the significance
mix
of Add an article
a mix
children
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everyon
despite Correct your spelling
everyone
of
their Remove the preposition
apply
color
, sex.Students can learn how to behave in Change the spelling
colour
group
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a group
the group
such
as politeness,kind and make
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making
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a suggestion
suggestion
without hurting someone while doing group activities .These morales are vital for their future endeavour.
To conclude, Fix the agreement mistake
suggestions
i
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I
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believe
belive
both Correct your spelling
believe
place
have unique importance , Change to a plural noun
places
onone
can replace with Correct your spelling
one
other
.Both Correct pronoun usage
another
home
and school
has
their own responsibility to insert moral Change the verb form
have
values
in children
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