Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Home
is the
first
school
for
children
so
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someone
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some one
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someone
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thinks that
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children
childrens
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children
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are being taught to be
good
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a good
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member
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of society by their
parents
.
Simulataneously
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Simultaneously
others opinion is that
school
is the better
place
for learning of social
values
. In
this
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we can analyse
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both views and will reach our opinion. The most
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significant
reason
of
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someone's
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someones
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belive
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parents
have
role
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in making
children
to
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be
good
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a good
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member
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of society is that
parents
are their
first
teachers and
home
is the
first
place
of learning.There are other causes behind it ,
first
and foremost , everyone considered childhood time is the better stage to prepare them for good fit of our society and most
children
are spending more time in
home
during their childhood.
Therefore
parents
can provide and can show good examples of social value .
Secondly
, we can exhort them to participate in caring
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old age people in
home
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the home
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.
This
will help them to insert some moral
values
such
as empathy , sympathy and
kind
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.
Last
but not least,
parents
can take
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initiative
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to make them participate in
carity
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charity
or voluntary activities.
This
will lead to appear changes in their life and learn the good
values
in their childhood will remain for the whole life.
However
, other
population
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believe
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belive
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that
school
is the best
place
for attaining social
values
.To be precise,our major time we are spending in educational institutions and we are getting
opportunity
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the opportunity
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to interact with
wide
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a wide
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variety of people.
Hence
, teachers can teach
them
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importance
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of sharing , make
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for mistakes and mutual respect.
School
is considered is the best
place
to show
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the significance
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of equality because there is
mix
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of
children
from
differen
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different
class and give equal importance to
everyon
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everyone
despite
of
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their
color
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, sex.Students can learn how to behave in
group
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a group
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such
as politeness,kind and
make
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a suggestion
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suggestion
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suggestions
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without hurting someone while doing group activities .These morales are vital for their future endeavour. To conclude,
i
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belive
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both
place
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have unique importance ,
onone
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one
can replace with
other
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another
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.Both
home
and
school
has
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their own responsibility to insert moral
values
in
children
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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