Schools have limited amount of money to spend.some people suggest that it should be sent on good teachers, while others say it should be spent for buying equipment like computers. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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that school is the best

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teachers

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teacher

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for students. Some people argue that the funds

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on

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teachers

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teachers,

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while

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others say it should be used to buy equipment like

Computers

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. It is necessary to discuss both scenarios.

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my opinion, today is the generation of

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so

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student needs items like

computers

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more nowadays.

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, it is very much necessary to have good

teachers

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in school as they are the backbone to teach young children.

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, a child of 5 years cannot understand the language of the system

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he requires a teacher

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can teach him/her basic language to speak and learn.

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, we can now see that we are living in a generation of 21st century

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it is known to be the generation of

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and

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technology

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has become an important part of life.

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children are being taught different languages like Java, C,

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computing

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can only be learned through these tools.

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me,

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is

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equally important to have

teachers

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in schools

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we need to focus more on equipment like a computer .We can see that now most of the schools and colleges have smart classes in which small children learn without the guidance of

teachers

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.

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computers

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in school will help students to learn different languages.

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, they can have practical knowledge too in various fields

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will help them in their careers

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we all know we have more than 70 per cent of jobs in the computer field. Suppose a child is learning

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the java

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java

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Java

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language and he cannot compile or run that program anywhere

else

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other than a computer.

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,

this

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is the reason why it is necessary to have these items in schools. I would like

to conclude

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by saying that

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too

plays

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a key role

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after looking at the takeover

technology

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has taken over everyone of us, it is required that we need to focus more on tools like

computers

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.