many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle. other believe that government should take care of it. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Health
is majorly dependent on Use synonyms
person's
will or preference or how one wants to lead his or her Correct article usage
a person's
our
life. Correct pronoun usage
apply
However
, I believe Linking Words
Use synonyms
government's
role is essential as well, to bring upfront Correct article usage
the government's
healthy
nation through healthy individuals.
Correct article usage
a healthy
First
and foremost, each and every individual should take care of themselves by opting Linking Words
healthy
alternatives and changing their lifestyle. Change preposition
for healthy
For instance
, Linking Words
instead
of consuming junk food like chips, cola, pizza, Linking Words
etcetra
in heft amount, they can include fresh fruits, coconut water, Correct your spelling
etcetera
vegetables
Change the noun form
vegetable
etcetra
. Correct your spelling
etcetera
In addition
to Linking Words
this
doing exercise for 20 minutes, 5 days a week leads to Linking Words
release
of endorphins which Correct article usage
the release
not
only helpful for their physical or mental Add a missing verb
is not
health
but Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
it
improves your relationship with their family is along with Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
it Linking Words
also
Linking Words
enchances
the concentration which eventually gives them success at work.
Correct your spelling
enhances
On the other hand
, there are other Linking Words
group
of people who argue that Change the wording
groups
government
should introduce policies or programmes to aware people Use synonyms
about
the benefits of Change preposition
of
balanced
diet. Apart from the Add an article
a balanced
government
should compel private institute to Use synonyms
organis
games or other activities from time to time, Correct your spelling
organise
also
follow the same practice in Linking Words
government
should Use synonyms
also
keep in mind the Linking Words
health
of vulnerable population like children and pregnant women who Use synonyms
needs
extra care and assistance. Change the verb form
need
For instance
, education about iron supplements should be given in school for Linking Words
adolescents
girls.
In conclusion, Replace the word
adolescent
although
Linking Words
Use synonyms
government
is encouraging people Add an article
the government
making
policies Change the verb form
to make
but
Remove the conjunction
apply
health
is more of individual responsibility as it is in his or her hand how they want to live their life.Use synonyms
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