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With the coming of new mass communication media like television and internet newspaper is losing its importance. Do you agree with this or not?

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Nowadays,different ways of
communication
 like television and
internet
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 are becoming more common than
tradition
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 ways like newspapers.It is discussed that the importance of
newspaper
 is missing.
This
 essay disagrees about
this
 opinion and it will be explained in a larger context.
Firstly
,the most remarkable point of
this
 change in
communication
 ways
is save
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 on paper.The more printed
media
 we use,the more harm we will cause to
the
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nature.Due to the increasing rate of
usuing
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using
media
instead
 of
newpaper
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newspaper
newspapers
,the process of
cuting
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cutting
 woods and trees has been truly decreased.Recent surveys
has
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 proven that by the votes of
people
,
media
 is more popular than printed one like
newspaper
,While when they were asked them about the reason,nearly all of
people
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 was shared a single reason and it was just about protecting natural resources.
On the other hand
,
people
 prefer to keep themselves up to date by following
media
 like television and
internet
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the internet
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.
By
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 the progression of technology,
internet
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the internet
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 is available to almost
the
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all
people
 and it has
became
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 the most common way of
communication
.The accessibility to
media
 is much
more
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easier than
newspaper
 and it would lead to being the
first
 choice of individuals.
Besides
,the information
on
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newspaper
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 is a bit limited.
Conversely
,there are a plethora sorts of information on
media
that is
 available for all
people
by
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 just a click. By and large,
this
 change which is taking place in our lives more than before is a good one.It does not mean that
people
 will forget the importance of
newpaper
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newspaper
,but they choose
new
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way
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ways
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 of
communication
 just to save their vital factors of life
such
 as trees.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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