Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will easier if there are fewer languages in the worlds. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In
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modern society, people communicate with each other in several different
languages
depending on wherever they live. Nowadays some
languages
are being replaced and
then
finally
disappeared
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. Some individuals believe that
this
is not crucial since the fewer
languages
in the world, the easier life will be. Analyzing the reduction of language's barriers as well as the costs that can be saved from having abundant
languages
will prove
this
Firstly
, the decreasing amount of
languages
can reduce the misunderstanding between communicators. Since the foreigners cannot completely understand the definition of every word, phrase or slangs words while they are used.
This
will easily
misleading
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information from the senders or it becomes impossible to deliver the messages. To illustrate, in Thailand where almost
of
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population
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can barely speak English in daily life, they
are not be
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able to give any information to international travellers asking for help.
In addition
, there is a huge amount of money
that
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spent on translation. Without various
languages
, there is no need for any translation system.
Therefore
,
this
will help everyone saves a lot of expenses as well as time.
For example
, if all nations use the same language, Chinese do not need to hire a translator while they are attending the global meeting. Having considered
this
matter carefully,
although
several
languages
mean there is
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diversity, having fewer
languages
will make life easier in terms of deductions the misunderstanding while
communication
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and saving more funds. In a nutshell, I personally agree with
this
mentioned idea.
Moreover
, I suggest that using only one language can make all nations become one.
Submitted by Varaiphand on

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