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In spite of technological developments in transportation , many people believe that a bicycle is the best way to reach in any destination .What are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle nowadays?

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Technology has increased rapidly to make human lives more comfortable and convenient. It is assumed by humans that
cycle
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 is the most sustainable and convenient mode of transport to get to their destination. In
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 are its
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 as it does not create pollution in the form of air or sound.
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 it has many health advantages.
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research done by WHO, cycling helps in maintaining weight and
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 keeps heart diseases at bay. Overall, bicycling seems to be helping keep the climate clean and
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 used as
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 by people to aid their health.
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, there are some disadvantages of bicycling , they include time delays in getting to your destination, as it is not as fast as a motorcycle with engine speed. What is more, it
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 is dangerous on roads and can cause accidents.
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, in underdeveloped
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 there are no separate lanes for
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 riders, which put them in harm's way of the
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on coming
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 traffic. According to a research paper, millions of people are in road accidents every year, making
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 very hazardous to human life. In conclusion, the disadvantages of a
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 are more vicious than the good from its benefits.But it should still be encouraged as it has an immense impact on the climate that will prolong the life of our planet.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • eco-friendly
  • cardiovascular fitness
  • urban pollution
  • congestion
  • cycling infrastructure
  • weather dependency
  • vulnerable
  • initial purchase
  • ongoing maintenance
  • secure storage
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