You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Explain your situation, Say why you feel unsure about living in the city Ask some questions about life in the city.

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Hello Amanda, I hope you are well. I just received wonderful news about the job which I attended an interview for

last

week. I was approved for the manager role that I've been aiming it for a long time. I'm excited about

this

opportunity,

however

, I need to move from Florianópolis to your city São Paulo. Changing city makes me feel insecure because I have never lived in another city than Florianópolis. I heard that São Paulo has high numbers of violence in some regions and the public transportation is not so good. As you know, I don't have a driver licence, so I really need to count on quick and safe transportation between my home and work,

otherwise

, I'll need to live near to the downtown. Do you know if the Recreio neighbourhood is near to Downtown? I was looking for apartments to live in

this

area. Do you know if

this

place is safe, even at night? In

this

new job, I believe it will be necessary to make extra work hours and I don't want to be in danger while returning home. Thank you in advance for providing me with all

this

information. I really appreciate your support. Warm regards, Evelyn

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