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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given graph illustrates the monthly
temperature
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 and precipitation for Kolkata city. Overall, We can see that for
temperature
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 as well
Rainfall
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 both start with the lowest point in the month of January and it reaches to peak approximately in mid of year from May to June and
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 declines
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 the lowest by the end of the year. Comparing both the data, the
Temperature
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 in the month of January was approx 2 celsius ,
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rainfall
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 was 200
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. By the end of ,May there was not much increase in
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 taking to 10
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 but
rainfall
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 reached the highest point with 300
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. A dramatic rose was seen in
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 in
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 month taking it to more than 25 degrees while a slight drop was there in
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. In July
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 was at a peak having 33 degrees.
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 the sharp drop was there in
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 taking it to 2 degrees by November, Precipitation was a slight decline for these 2 months at about 250
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.
Rainfall
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 as well
temperature
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 fell in December with having 210
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 precipitant and
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temperature
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.
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