In some countries around the world, men and women are having babies late in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There are many reasons influencing families to become
parents
later in the modern world. Some say that
this
is not a good trend while others argue that it is a new
lifestyle
and more adaptable to the modern world. my opinion stands closer to the former statement.
To begin
with, it is known that the new urban
lifestyle
differs in many ways from the traditional
one
. in the past,
one
of the
parents
(mostly women) were expected to be at home so it was easier to raise a toddler as
one
of the
parents
was there to take care of them. an arrangement which lost its value in the modern
lifestyle
as both
parents
are working in most countries nowadays. to continue, it is important to have in mind that adding a family member requires financial support which is harder because of the consumerist behaviour of citizens.
in other words
, before ,bringing a child to live
parents
should think about all the expenses they are going to have.
for example
, in
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a child with two working
parents
needs daycare and pre-education aside from all the nessecury expenses they have. as is said, having children late can have some demerits.
one
of them is the fact that as the
parents
are older there is a bigger age difference between them so they are coming from completely deferent backgrounds. to make it more tangible, we can talk about a study which showed that families with younger
parents
had more bonds as they could enjoy the same activities together and have more interactions.
On the other hand
, having babies later in life have many advantages as well.
one
of them is financial support. meaning that as the
parents
are older they achieve higher levels in their professional life and have more income so they can think of having extra expenses without the economic burden which young
parents
feel so they can spend more time taking care of their infant.
for instance
in a family where the
parents
are not junior staff and can manage to have a more flexible work time children can spend more time with their
parents
. In conclusion, the new urban
lifestyle
had led to many difficulties having a consequence of families having children later.
this
can have both pros and cons but it seems that in
this
new behaviour its assets are more tangible than the liabilities.
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