In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays an increasing

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of

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migrate from rural areas to

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, so the countryside society is declining.

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there are many perspectives as to whether it is beneficial or not, I consider

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propensity completely disadvantageous.

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, a rising

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of rural inhabitants moving to

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causes overpopulation in urban areas.

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to say, growing demands from residents often exceed supplies that a place can offer, including

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places of accommodation. Paris is a prime example, where

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of a huge

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of rural immigrants between 2000 and 2010, it has become almost impossible to find a flat or home in

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a growing tendency to move to

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has caused a population explosion in many places.

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, as rural

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emigrate from their hometowns, local customs are becoming extinct.

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, because of a decrease in the

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of

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living there, the cultivation of certain traditions is becoming either less common

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or they simply disappear.

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known Italian 'Toscanian Bread Festival' is no longer organized, because no

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are familiar with the specific recipes, so

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a minority is willing to continue

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local tradition.

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, it can be seen that the growing tendency to emigrate from the countryside poses a threat to local heritage.

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, I am of the opinion that a rising

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of rural

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immigrations to

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is

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trend, as not only does it cause overpopulation in urban zones, but it

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weakens the traditions of the countryside.