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some experts believes that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at a primary school rather than secondary school. Do advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages

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There are skilled personnel who are of the opinion that
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 it's better for children to start learning a foreign
language
 while in primary
school
,
instead
 of introducing it to them in secondary
school
. In early childhood, young ones tend to be eager to learn and explore new things, it's Paramount that advantage is taken over
this
 development stage, by introducing a new
language
 that will be key to communication. As a child gets older, especially in adolescence, He or She gets distracted by so many things,
for
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 peer pressure, introducing new concepts, like a new
language
 may not add value. Statistics from
Kenyan
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 education system has confirmed that there is usually a decline in
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 of students in their
second
 year of secondary education, it's at
this
 point that new subjects are introduced, as they get to their
third
 and fourth year when they drop these subjects, they spring up again with exemplary performance. As children get older, they have a tendency of being bored easily, so adding
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 to their curriculum may not have
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 impact
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 unless it's building on skills acquired earlier on.
On the other
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 secondary
School
 students are usually laying
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 for their
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career
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 some have dreams of being diplomats, for
such
, venturing into a new
language
 may not be unusual. A good example is German
that is
 introduced to
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 education system in high
school
, a student who desires to study and work in Germany, will be very positive, work hard and have excellent scores. To sum it up, learning a foreign
language
 has numerous benefits if introduced during early childhood in primary
school
,
however
 owing to career paths, it may be introduced in secondary
school
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 measure of benefits.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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