Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
When walking along the streets especially
crowed-
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crowded-people
people
places, most people
were asked at least once by beggars
to give them some cash. There is a controversial discussion about this
situation that providing money
to beggars
is appropriate or not. Partly of the populations
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population
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doing
such
an action, while others consider that it is a good thing to do. In my opinion, I believe that people
should not grant their money
to the beggar and I will explain the reasons in the essay below.
To begin
with, in long term, bestowing money
to beggars
causes a negative consequence afterwards because people
may indirectly increase the number of baggers in the future. To illustrate, if there are abundant pedestrians donating money
to the beggars
, the total amount of money
is high although
the value of each person granting to them seem slightly. This
behaviour will encourage the vagrants or homeless people
who have no work and income to become an
another Correct article usage
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baggar
since they can receive earnings from the donators.
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beggar
bagger
Furthermore
, when considering the reason, most citizens because of having sympathy toward other human
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other humans
however
, human trafficking operation
may use Fix the agreement mistake
operations
this
method to gain benefit. For instance
, among the real beggars
, there are some group
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people
that may be kidnap
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force
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beggars
and givers cannot distinguish whether it is a criminal or not. That means the citizens giving cash to them unintentionally give an
aid to the wrong-doing.
To conclude, I conceive that donating Remove the article
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money
to beggars
is not suitable because it conduces to unfavourable aftermaths more than benefits such
as the increased quantity of beggars
and criminality. Instead
, beggars
should not exist in the
society in order to avoid these results.Correct article usage
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