Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?

When walking along the streets especially
crowed-
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people
places, most
people
were asked at least once by
beggars
to give them some cash. There is a controversial discussion about
this
situation that providing
money
to
beggars
is appropriate or not. Partly of the
populations
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refute
to do
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such
an action, while others consider that it is a good thing to do. In my opinion, I believe that
people
should not grant their
money
to the beggar and I will explain the reasons in the essay below.
To begin
with, in long term, bestowing
money
to
beggars
causes a negative consequence afterwards because
people
may indirectly increase the number of baggers in the future. To illustrate, if there are abundant pedestrians donating
money
to the
beggars
, the total amount of
money
is high
although
the value of each person granting to them seem slightly.
This
behaviour will encourage the vagrants or homeless
people
who have no work and income to become
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another
baggar
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beggar
bagger
since they can receive earnings from the donators.
Furthermore
, when considering the reason, most citizens because of having sympathy toward
other human
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;
however
, human trafficking
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may use
this
method to gain benefit.
For instance
, among the real
beggars
, there are some
group
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of
people
that may be
kidnap
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and
force
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to be
beggars
and givers cannot distinguish whether it is a criminal or not. That means the citizens giving cash to them unintentionally give
an
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aid to the wrong-doing. To conclude, I conceive that donating
money
to
beggars
is not suitable because it conduces to unfavourable aftermaths more than benefits
such
as the increased quantity of
beggars
and criminality.
Instead
,
beggars
should not exist in
the
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society in order to avoid these results.
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