Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircuts and beauty products to enhance their appearance .Some people think that it is a good way to spend money, while others think there is a better way to spend it.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A majority of the general population, invest a lot financially, to enhance how they look and dress.
Although
some people think that if you have the property, spending it on looking good to boost both your self-confidence and how others look at you is a good idea to spend it,
however
, concur with those who believe that
this
cash could be put into better use paying rent, fees or donating to charity. Someone's self-esteem is very vital to how they will live and interact with the general population.
As a result
, most people have resorted to investing tons of cash on hair, makeup, and dressing. Rightfully so, as it boosts their confidence.
For instance
in the corporate world today, you will barely ever, run into a woman without makeup, her hair well done, and dressed smartly. Some even venture
further
into the quest for beauty, eventually doing surgeries, to make themselves look better.
This
tends to be quite costly.
However
,
this
results in the individual feeling good about themselves and allows them to be more productive at work
thus
it is a good way to spend
money
.
However
, I do believe that
this
salary could be put to better use.
In other words
, there are so many people and things in the world that need financial aid that
this
money
could go into and
besides
, the individual could save up the
money
and put it on studies or mortgage. As a form of illustration, in Kenya, to get a full face of make-up could cost one about 4000 shillings.
Moreover
, you would still need to do your hair, nails and so many more on your body to be fully made up. Couple that with dressing and you're looking at almost 10,000 sh.
This
is equivalent to two months rent in most towns.
Hence
the whole process is rendered too expensive. In conclusion, in as much as an investment into how one looks so as to boost their confidence is a good way to spend
money
, I believe
this
hard-earned
money
could serve a better purpose on education, rent or even charity organisations.
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