Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In
this
twenty-
first
century, the extinction of particular
species
and the deterioration of environmental
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are overwhelmingly concerned by us. Even though the disappearance of certain
species
either
plants
or
animals
are
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considered
as
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big
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challenge.
Nonetheless
, I mostly agree with the notion that environmental disturbance is more significant. By analyzing its impact on habitat, food supply and
reproduction
;
this
easy will support my stand with tiny flows.
First
of all,
environment
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the environment
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is being considered the major shelter for its inhabitants (
plants
and
animals
). Amazon rain forest
, in
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fact,
the
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world largest dwelling place for a variety of plant and animal
species
. The reason is that
,
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it
environment
by centuries protecting the life.
Moreover
, the residing nature continuously
ensuring
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food supply for them. Tiger
for instance
arrange
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his food by preying
other
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animals
.
Therefore
, if the
environment
is suffered,
then
it ultimately
threats
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its dwellers.
Secondly
, the
reproduction
of
animals
and
plants
completely depends on their surrounding ingenuous
environment
. If there is any disturbance, the composition of
various
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the various
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component
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components
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will change, meaning adverse effects have been
act
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as
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a constraint
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constraint
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constraints
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for normal
reproduction
.
For example
, the excessive level of
mercuray
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mercury
and lead in the ambient weather dramatically decrease the
reproduction
performance.
Additionally
, it will be threatening for the survivability of those native
plants
and
animals
.
As a result
, terrible change in the
environment
causes
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a challenge
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challenge
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challenges
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for
reproduction
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the reproduction
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and survivability of its domestic
species
.
Nevertheless
, the decline or death of a certain
species
both
plants
and
animals
makes ecological imbalance, meaning the depending life are being at the zenith of extinction. Sundarban (Mangrove forest of Bangladesh)
for instance
, the
number
of tigers are gradually decreasing due to the
reduction
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number
of dear.
Similarly
, there is not too much tiger, resulting human have been cutting down trees
with out
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of voids.
As a result
, the
decrease
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number
of
animals
and trees awfully
affecting
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its
environment
. In conclusion,
although
the variation in
number
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of trees and
animals
have contributed to its adverse
environment
, the
environment
is largely recognized as the key factor for balancing and surviving the world.
Otherwise
, all attempts to make
better
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earth
in
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vain and the
environment
will be fully unsuitable for
human
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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