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You have discovered a lot of rubbish in a lake near where you live. In the past, the lake had always been clean. Write a letter to the local council. In the letter: describe the type of rubbish that you saw in the lake explain where you think the waste has come from suggest what the council should do about the problem

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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huge
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 pile of rubbish near the
lake
. I am
resident
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 of Guildford Drive and I reside near
to
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the
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Himraw
lake
, which is just opposite
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my house. In the
past
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this
lake
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 been always crystal clear and have attracted a plethora of tourists.
However
, the scenario
have
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 changed now, as it is at the moment garbage dumping site. Most of the time it is the plastic bags, cans, used
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swimwear
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swim wear
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, food scraps or containers, which are being dumped here. Whereas, sometimes I have even noticed
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 pile of black plastic
bag
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 stacked with rubbish kept here. As an onlooker, I could clearly state that the waste materials are getting dumped here by the travellers, who come to visit
near by
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 Mount track. I would really like to request you to take some actions against
this
, as it is degrading the aesthetic beauty of the place.
Moreover
,
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 even getting smelly day by day, which is aggravating the concern of the nearby residents. Kindly do impose certain measures or provide some public rubbish bins near to the
lake
, so that
it
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 could be used
instead
. I would be really thankful to you
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 if you could consider my plea. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Neethu Babu
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