Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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last

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two or three decades, many nations have been giving more attention to

improve

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to

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their's financial breakthroughs and they think that

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is a vital objective in order to reduce the

poverty

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. Some folks think that there are other kinds of development

also

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the utmost

significant

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such

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as infrasture improvement, education, hospital amenities.

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essay discusses both viewpoints for the following reasons. On the one hand, giving more attention

for

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improving

economy

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the economy

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can be reduced to

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apply

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poverty

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in order

to

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for

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country's

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the country's

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citizen

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citizens

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might live a good lifestyle.

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,

country's

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a country's

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economy is

the

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vital aspect for every nation because

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can only decide how much amount of money would be sent to other sectors. Taking developed states

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for

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instance, these governments have more focused on economic progress,

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consequently

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their's citizens have been enjoying

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all the amenities as well as the

poverty

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ratio are very less than developing nations.

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, the governments give more attention

on

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developing

state's

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the state's

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financial status.

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, there are other types of breakthroughs

are

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that are

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the same level of

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essential for a territory. Education and hospital

is

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the basic fundamental needs for human,

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the ministry should be given more importance on

these sector

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too.

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, in Singapore,

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ministry gives free

eeducation

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education

and hospital amenities for their residents,

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is a small nation to compared other countries, even though they

provides

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because

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territory has been giving more focus on

country's

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the country's

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infrastructure development too. Obviously, other parts are equally significant

aspect

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aspects

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for every empire. To conclude, financial improvement is the vital factor of every empire. Reducing the

poverty

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is the vital goal for giving more focus on economic progress, there are some other types of breakthroughs

are

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equally

utmost

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of utmost

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significant

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significance

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for each and every

nations

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nation

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. In my opinion, about

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, the ruling party should be given more

concenration

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concentration

on other kinds of advancement like basic needs.