Some people believe that old public buildings in cities should be restored while others say that they should be demolished and new buildings should be built instead. Agree or disagree?

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People

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often debate whether

ancient

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an ancient

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building

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should be

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up or

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. Some of them consider that they will be

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whereas others believe that they are useless. In

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essay,

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will discuss both

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of the argument. On the one hand, many

people

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believe that traditional

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are beneficial for

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society in many ways.

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is because they help other

people

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to recognize

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unique building of the town.

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, tourists throughout the world travel to different places just to experience alternative traditional values and landmarks so

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will be attractive things for them. The ancient building

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help

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younger children improve

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their

skills in historical structure in a better way.

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, the unique traditional place will

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new

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the new

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apartment was built

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, there are few

people

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who think that

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building is not necessary and use high cost. To illustrate, sometimes

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old

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building may use more cost and more time than

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a new one .

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, due to the increase of population, someplace is not able to contain all staff in the building so they need a different that answer their wants. To conclude, having considered

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each

side of the argument, I am opinion that there are lots of social values and

beneficials

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beneficial

with

historical

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the historical

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building to keep it with our society.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

223 words

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Some people believe that old public buildings in cities should be restored while others say that they should be demolished and new buildings should be built instead. Agree or disagree?

Your opinion

You are going abroad on holiday and your friend will stay in your home while you are away. Write a letter to your friend, in your letter - explain where you hide the keys - describe what your friend needs to do in your absent - say when you are coming back

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In many countries women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first few months after the birth of their baby. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

You borrowed an item from your friend. While it was in your possession, it got damaged. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for lending the item to you. Explain how it got damaged. Tell your friend what you plan to do about it.