Some people believe that old public buildings in cities should be restored while others say that they should be demolished and new buildings should be built instead. Agree or disagree?

People
often debate whether
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building
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should be
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up or
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. Some of them consider that they will be
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whereas others believe that they are useless. In
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will discuss both
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of the argument. On the one hand, many
people
believe that traditional
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are beneficial for
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society in many ways.
This
is because they help other
people
to recognize
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unique building of the town.
For example
, tourists throughout the world travel to different places just to experience alternative traditional values and landmarks so
this
will be attractive things for them. The ancient building
also
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younger children improve
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their
skills in historical structure in a better way.
Thus
, the unique traditional place will
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if
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the new
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apartment was built
instead
.
However
, there are few
people
who think that
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building is not necessary and use high cost. To illustrate, sometimes
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up
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building may use more cost and more time than
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a new one .
Moreover
, due to the increase of population, someplace is not able to contain all staff in the building so they need a different that answer their wants. To conclude, having considered
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each
side of the argument, I am opinion that there are lots of social values and
beneficials
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beneficial
with
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the historical
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building to keep it with our society.
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