Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Today many believe that the union is not using the financial resources in an appropriate step.

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, it can use in a better process that every individual can be benefited by improving in interesting areas and skills. In my opinion, I agree with

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statement and give necessary explanations. The

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and foremost reason, is the younger generation need more encouragement from higher authorities by investing financially

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as,providing employment training programs,workshops where youth can get benefit in getting job or use as the

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course.

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,state programs are helpful to many poor families who are unable to invest money in colleges and institutions.

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,providing tuition fees and scholarships to merit students can give an additional benefit and be helpful for the scheduled community.

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,it is the only form officials can get through with the individuals and give speeches and advertisements and give motivation for a better future.

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,increasing employment agencies and other sources

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as resume preparation and giving guidance from higher professionals is the primary role which enables individuals in getting better employment options in interested skills.

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,government institutions are offering alternative studies in many areas.

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,

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is essential for many students who stopped their education in between and continue their studies for better career options.

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,others believe that learning art is inherited, when we are younger age and it always resembles additional qualifications

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music and dance or embroidery,culinary arts.

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,

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fine arts helps the person in pursuing a

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course

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and maintains it has a hobby.

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, the authority is providing opportunities to use

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art in subway stations and providing platforms in various commercial complexes as a professional pathway. In conclusion,governments need to encourage men and women according to the interesting areas,so that it is useful to build

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in the future.

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,nowadays arts has less important and many are interested in looking for a job as a course. In my opinion, the authority

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to spend money

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a professional process. So that it helps in building their career and inbuilt resiliency.