some believe it is important for cities and towns to invest heavily in building large outdoor public spaces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often a subject of discussion in fre sections of society whether Govt. civic agency should invest
tremendous
amount of funds in constructing outdoor Add an article
a tremendous
parks
and other amenities for its General public for sake of hangouts and entertainment. I completely agree with the viewpoint and in next
paragraphs, I shall elucidate the reasons for it.
To embark on, housing and Correct article usage
the next
accomodation
complexes are shrinking in size from vast Correct your spelling
accommodation
one story
villa complex to mere single bedroom flat. Add a hyphen
one-story
Therefore
, People require outdoor spaces
to sit and relax with friends and family, after a long day with hectic
schedule. Add an article
a hectic
Moreover
, these public parks
should be well equipped with all sorts of exercise instruments like threadmills
and outdoor gym Correct your spelling
treadmills
equipments
to enable all to perform physical exercise regularly and become fit as well as productive to work. Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
Consequently
, Municipal and civic authority
should invest heavy budgets in constructing Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
of
Change preposition
apply
these infrastructure
, which will be eventually Change the determiner
this infrastructure
these infrastructures
assisting
in maintaining physical Wrong verb form
assist
andmental
fitness. Correct your spelling
and mental
mental
Subsequently
, nation growth and development will progress by achieving high productivity of individuals at work place
.
Correct your spelling
workplace
Futhermore
, public Correct your spelling
Furthermore
spaces
like amusement, society and shopping parks
serve as places to visit for grocery , restaurants as well as clothes stores, which will raise goverment
revenue through Correct your spelling
government
collection
of Add an article
the collection
tax
in form of sales of products as well as property owing tax. Fix the agreement mistake
taxes
Hence
generate huge chunks of money for the Govt., which can be utilized for welfare works for its citizens. In addition
, general
public Add an article
the general
also
gets benefitted by
different stores, which aids in fetching Change preposition
from
variety
of needed good quality products Correct article usage
a variety
such
as grocery or electronics items at cheaper cost. Because each store will procure products from its own supply chain network and distributor. so variety and affordable goods are obtained under one roof. Hence
general public benefit
from public malls and Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
spaces
.
To sum up, I totally agree that civic authority
should allocate huge budgets for the building of outdoor infrastructure Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
spaces
and parks
, as it will benifit
not only Correct your spelling
benefit
benefits
general
public by serving a way to visit and relax but Correct article usage
the general
also
raise Govt. revenue by collecting taxes from it.Submitted by aijazahmedofficial1 on
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