Many working people get little or not exercise during the work day, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
In the present era, workout has become almost extinct from the life of an individual because of their hectic schedule.
Cosequently
, it started depreciating one's fitness. There are multiple causes for it Correct your spelling
Consequently
such
as bad time management skills and less financial capabilities and a possible solution for it could be self realisation
and initiatives by the authorities. I will explain it in detail Add a hyphen
self-realisation
further
.
To begin
with, primarily, the major influencing factor is lack of time. People in their busy jobs could not afford ample time for working out. Secondly
, economical status also
plays a crucial part owning to the fact that gym and other modes of exercises
do require a membership which is quite expensive for a Fix the agreement mistake
exercise
commom
man. Correct your spelling
common
For instance
, a friend of mine who though had keen
interest Add an article
a keen
on
his fitness could still not work towards it because he could not bear that kind of Change preposition
in
fees
. Fix the agreement mistake
fee
Thus
, these things do have a great impact on lives
of many which needs to be mitigated.
Correct article usage
the lives
On the other hand
, a practical mitigating measure is self motivation
. Add a hyphen
self-motivation
Firstly
, no one can drive a person to be fit. Further
, it has to come with in
himself and for Correct your spelling
within
this
to happen he needs to be aware of both possible pros and cons. Secondly
, government
should provide few recreational facilities and public places at no cost as it would aid people to make use of them for whom money is the constraint. To illustrate it, citizens with low household Add an article
the government
income
in my country made great use of Fix the agreement mistake
incomes
this
initiation by the rulers. As a result
, it got them into better shapes and be lesser prone to diseases.
To conclude, there are many reason
for an individual Change to a plural noun
reasons
for
not Change preposition
apply
playing
sports to stay healthier and not have any illness. Change the verb form
to play
However
, if the governments make arrangements for them at no cost it would definitely motivate them to take part in these activites
.Correct your spelling
activities
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