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Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree?

#countries #jobs #employees
With the advent of globalization, now
people
 can go to any part of the world in search of a job.
Moreover
, expert
people
 of the undeveloped
countries
 can go to rich
countries
 in search of good opportunities. I totally agree with
this
 statement as it will lead to obtaining many multiple profits.
Firstly
, Skilled and knowledgeable
people
 from poor
countries
 going to wealthy
countries
 will help in improving the economic
condition
 of the family as well as it will alter the mindset of other members and society
people
. They too now can think of moving outside the
country
 and could live a prosperous life.
For example
, If a person who had good proficiency and is now in a foreign
country
 gets good pay so his siblings will be able to study and it will
also
 switch the mindset of other young siblings and they too will
work
 hard to achieve success.
Secondly
, It too will change the economic
condition
 of the
country
 too as well as
employment
. Now the question arises : How will the job of a few
people
 alter the economic
condition
 of the
country
 and
employment
 ? While
,
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 lots of
people
 going abroad to
work
 one or two will surely think of developing
employment
 possibility in their own
country
.After gaining business knowledge from other
countries
, they surely can open some sort of similar
work
 in their own
country
 will eradicate both
employment
 as well as boost the economic
condition
 of the
country
. To conclude, I would say that globalization has encouraged every individual to achieve success and prosperity and In order to generate
employment
 in poor
countries
 as well as to strengthen their economic
condition
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 it will very necessary to
work
 in wealthy
countries
.
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