Some people believe that it is best to do the same type of work throughout your life. Others feel that it is beneficial to change jobs often. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is undeniable that many
folk
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are like to
work
at the same
type
of
job
since the
first
job
throughout their life.
However
, some people believe that it could be more beneficial for them
,
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if they
change
jobs
often to adjust the
salary
base. The following paragraph will be discussing both opinions and my perspective.
Therefore
, the conclusion has been reached. On the one hand, those who think that it is best to stay in the same
type
of career until they are retired.
This
group of people have an idea that if they are already good at
this
type
of
job
, why do they need to
change
a
job
from the thing that they are familiar with to something that they do not used to it.
Moreover
, if they decided to
change
their career or
type
of
work
, the
salary
will certainly start as same as
first
jobbers which make many people are less likely to
change
their career due to the
salary
that will reset again and it will be wasting of their old
job
experience.
On the other hand
, those who believe that it is beneficial to
change
their
jobs
often have an idea that the more they
change
jobs
the more
salary
they will be received because changing
jobs
,
this
also
help them have the unique experience because they had a chance to
work
in various field of
work
, which will make them run out of
work
once after they make a decision to take a break from the current
job
. In summary, both opinions have their advantages and disadvantages. According to my perspective, I believe that we should
change
jobs
but still
work
in the same field of
work
because
this
will make us have more experience and a higher
salary
than before.
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