Many people believe that it's better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

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Self-learning can help

people

develop their thought,

however

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most

people

still believe that learning with

others

is superior. In my opinion, I agree with

this

statement due to

people

can exchange their thought.

Nevertheless

, it is not proper for the

people

who do not favour

others

. In the case of school life, these can help students to concentrate on teachers because of the atmosphere in the classroom. On other hand, if their friends pay attention to what the teacher is teaching, it can encourage everyone to concentrate too.

For example

people

always tend to do similar things, and they do not want to be distinguished. So, when someone in the classroom

interested

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to learn in the subject. Most

others

will imitate and do what

people

do.

Furthermore

people

can exchange some new ideas, something that some

people

maybe do not know, but their classmates know.

This

can help a lot to explore their thought and can improve their skill and

also

their social skill. Many

people

are always there to help you.

However

this

can be argued that it is not suitable to reserve

people

due to they have to face

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others

in the classroom. Sometimes

teacher

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a teacher

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might ask them a question in front of the rest, and

this

will press the students a lot if they can not answer the questions.

Moreover

, the students do not have any courage to ask the teacher when they do not understand.

Besides

, during the class, the classmates like to talk, resulting in bothering the

others

who would like to learn.

Therefore

, individual learning suits the

people

who want to be personal. In conclusion, it has some benefits to some

people

who need a

freind

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friend

to help them but not for some

people

who want to be alone.

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