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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#communications #it’s #letters
Communication
 has changed over the years.
People
 used to write
a
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letters
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letters
 and now digital
communication
 has taken over the ancient method. I believe that
,
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 quick way to pass the information is much better than
the
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writing
letters
 due to the fact that it takes time. A decade ago, when there was less use of digital
communication
,
people
 used to write a
letter
.
However
, writing a
letter
 was
time consuming
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 process as it used to take a week to reach the destination. Reading a
letter
 from your loved
one
 is always overwhelming and till date, some companies send a
letter
 to
the
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another company for the invitation or
work related
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 thing. For them, it is the best way to
communication
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 with respect and they want to keep alive the old legacy.
For example
, TATA motors
sends
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 consolation
letter
 to their employee when they lost their immediate family
memeber
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member
members
 to show them that
company
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 cares for their workers and show respect and affection through
such
letters
 and do not send just an email.
Nevertheless
, as soon as modern
communication
 has taken the place,
letters
 are being extinct. Personally, text messages,
whatsapp
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 and other social media
platform
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 have replaced writing a
letter
. While professionally, emails did that job. In
this
 modern era,
people
 do not have much time to write a
letter
 and post it and wait for another party to receive it and reply. They
are habituate
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of
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 doing work with
one
 click. Eventually, it is the best way to get
one
's job faster.
For instance
,
one
 emergency call will save a person's life. Modern
communication
 is not just quick but it helps
keeping
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world
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 connected. In conclusion,
new
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a new
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 trend of staying in touch with
people
 is much better
thatn
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than
 writing a
letter
.
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