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More and more young people use the Internet to socialise. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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internet
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 to communicate among youngsters is becoming more popular.
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 a move has both benefits and drawbacks. Social media has reduced the spread of aerosol diseases
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 as covid 19.
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 is so because there is less human contact who can act as a medium of transmitting the viruses.
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, using the
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 one can interact with more than 20 individuals at the same time from different places, learning their culture, language through
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phones or and computers. The lack of physical connection cuts the transmission of
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 infection.
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 there are a number of different network platforms
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 as Facebook, WhatsUp that one can utilise to socialise with
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,at any given time. With
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 ,availability one can start a conversation and find
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 to talk to at any time of the day. The disadvantages of network socialisation include
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 of social skill development and privacy. It is said that every person especially the youth need physical contact to develop meaningful social skills that are important in teamwork.
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 connections are vital in maintaining long-lasting relationships.
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, studies show that 25% of adults who have not had adequate physical interaction with
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 during their youth fail to make and maintain fruitful relationships with other
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.
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 to poor relationship development,
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 socialisation has no privacy.
People
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 can hack into someone 's account and post private conversations into the public domain.
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 has detrimental consequences on
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 's emotions. In conclusion, despite lack of privacy and social skills abilities , the
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 offers a reduction in transmission of deadly infections and a huge platform to communicate with many
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 at a go.
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