In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?
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food
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to poor countries could be the rapid solution.
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food
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the food
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that will
last
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counties
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Although
very difficult, finding a solution is not impossible. The progression of sharing knowledge from the first
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third
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for households and agriculture usage in several towns in Africa. This
development helps more than thousands
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