Some teacher think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantage outweigh the disadvantage
Most of the mentors go with the views that, treading trainee
multinationly
. Would be Correct your spelling
multinational
favorabe
for all young Correct your spelling
favourable
learner
. Fix the agreement mistake
learners
Inspite
of having Correct your spelling
In spite
drawback
like brain drain, its advantages overweight the disadvantage.
In many Fix the agreement mistake
drawbacks
country
higher study Fix the agreement mistake
countries
in
abroad is a dream Change preposition
apply
to
the trainee, who Change preposition
for
work
hard to get an opportunity to go outter
the Correct your spelling
out
country
. The exchange programe
of Correct your spelling
programme
program
student
, give a new door open to that Add an article
a student
the student
learner
to enrich their knowledge at their desigre
universities, where they can Correct your spelling
desire
design
desired
work
with scholar
. Add an article
the scholar
a scholar
For instance
, the scholarship program provided by Europe
countries in Bangladesh is highly markable, Replace the word
European
In addition
to this
, if we see the chance students get by exchanging student
to know the other Fix the agreement mistake
students
culturers
to Correct your spelling
cultures
accoustom
with Correct your spelling
accustom
is
fall with blessing. If help them to broaden their mind, which Correct your spelling
it
make
them global people, Change the verb form
makes
than
people of a single Replace the word
then
country
. Due to this
, they will work
for the world than nation
. Add an article
the nation
a nation
For example
, many Bangladeshi working on NASA, nows collective interest than personal.
However
, the exchange program of learner
Fix the agreement mistake
learners
also
having
Wrong verb form
has
demarits
live brain drain. Many students like to stay where they go for study with Correct your spelling
demerits
job
than going back to their own countries cause of the Add an article
the job
a job
batter
environment and career they get, which Change the verb form
battered
creats
a national crisis of lacking young power of intellect. To illustrate, many Correct your spelling
creates
scholar
of Bangladesh Change to a plural noun
scholars
staying
in Wrong verb form
stay
UK
owing to Correct article usage
the UK
have
a bright future with salary than own Wrong verb form
having
country
.
To conclude, although
the tutors find the transnational learner
trade is fruitful for a country
, it also
brings some misfortune to the nation or creating
Wrong verb form
creates
young
Correct article usage
a young
leader
. Apart from it, the commutation of scholars is a good choice, in my view, which help the world to be a batter place. Ignoring Fix the agreement mistake
leaders
national
fact, they Add an article
the national
work
for the world.Submitted by alina.aphrodite on
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