Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The variety of each individual's interests have made the world

this

beautiful. Each and everyone has their own cup of tea and

that is

the zone which they find more comfortable to live in. Despite

this

universal law, some believe that undergraduates should allow following a certain set of limited

subject

areas

instead

of their own preferences. There are both negative and positive facts under each category. People tend to believe

subject

areas like science and technology will be useful in the future.There are some reasons to support

this

stand.

Firstly

, there is a massive job market in the technology field and

this

is one key requirement of any undergraduate after completing his degree.

For example

, in Sri Lanka, the demand for civil engineers is much higher than in other fields. On some occasions, the agreements are signed even before the final exam.

Secondly

, those fields can directly be linked to ongoing development projects in the country. Pumping young blood into those projects will definitely expedite the progress.

However

, the contribution of other subjects like art, music, drama, archaeology or languages

also

plays a vital role in the social development of the nation. While science and technology bring more economic development to the country, these kinds of subjects improve the mental well being of a person.

Also

, a student might be ended up in an unrecoverable mental frustration due to not having the opportunity to follow his own dream.There are some cases where students left their course in between study years since those subjects did not meet their mental expectations. In my opinion, a certain number of vacancies should be published under each aesthetic

subject

Then

students can alter their selection and choose another field

instead

of ending up as a jobless graduate. In meantime, the vacancy list should be an increase in science-related

subject

areas to recruit

further

students.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

310 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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