Some sports are extremely dangerous to the players. Why do people participate in such sports? Tell some measures to avoid the risks involved.

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extreme

sports

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have increasingly become popular among nowadays people. In

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following paragraphs, the reasons, why

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type of

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sports

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has gained

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popularity will be discussed.

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, the sensible curbs to prevent the likely accidents

occuring

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occurring

during

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this

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activities will be addressed.

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with the causes of gaining more interest, the

extream

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extreme

sports

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attract the players due to its enjoyment. When

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are playing

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sport

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, the chemical substance in

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body called Adrenaline is released.

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, they feel enjoyable, excited, and happy as well as

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can relieve all stresses from the daily drudgery.

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, Bunjee jump can make people scared of the high, and forget all disappointment and sadness.

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,

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dangerous

sport

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like rock climbing and

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can be

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remarkable experience

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the players, and they can share

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experience

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others, which make them more interesting in order to make a relationship with others. To illustrate, I always tell my story, when I jumped from the bridge height 12 metres at the

advanture

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adventure

camp in Suphanburee,

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I can make friends with

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easier.

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,

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sports

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always come with the risk of getting hurt. In order to prevent

emergency

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which may occur from

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sport

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, individuals should wear

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protective

unifrom

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uniform

such

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as helmets and life jackets.

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, they should thoroughly read the instruction prior to play, and strictly conform

every

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to every

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steps

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of rules and regulations. If you do these two measures, you will be safe from

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serious accidents. In conclusion,

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although

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type of

sport

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is dangerous, which accidents can occur

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every moment, a vast majority of people are still fond of playing it as it provides the exciting feeling that contributes to stress relief, and they can tell

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story to impress and to make friends with others.

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, all likely

horrifics

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horrific

can be protected by wearing a protector, and strictly following the regulations.