Some people say the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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that about the other more important environmental trouble

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biodiversity
extinction
habitat loss
ecosystem
food chain
imbalance
interconnected
climate change
pollution
personal actions
policy changes
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Some people say the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Compare new and old generation's interests you can mention. Advantages and disadvantages of their interest.

Nowadays people have developed poor eating habits and do not eat a balanced diet. What are the reasons behind this?

Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems trying alternative medicine and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctors. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people think that arts (for example, music or painting) don't directly improve people's wellbeing, and therefore the goverment should spend money on other things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem.What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?